Presenting and Revision: Updated Adverts in response to criticism
With this post i plan on addressing the criticisms made by my client in the last post and presenting them here. This post will only include the adverts that have been improved upon, not the entire body of work. The entire body of work can be viewed on the next post, Final presentation.
1) Double page spreads
2) UPDATED SECOND PAGE OF DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
Note: the one without the logo in the top left is the one used in double page spread advertisement. The one with a logo is for single page production
1) Double page spreads
2) UPDATED SECOND PAGE OF DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
Note: the one without the logo in the top left is the one used in double page spread advertisement. The one with a logo is for single page production
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AFTER
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3) IMPROVEMENTS TO KEYBOARD ADVERTS
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AFTER (Notice the boldness of the slogan)
4) IMPROVEMENTS TO HEADSET ADVERTISEMENTS
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5) IMPROVEMENTS TO MOUSE ADVERTS
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6) PUTTING THESE ADVERTS ON BILLBOARDS
GAME store, Chelmsford
Times Square
7) PUTTING THESE ADS ON WEBSITES
ARCTIS 5 HEADSET
APEX M750 KEYBOARD
RIVAL 110 MOUSE
Moving on from these improvements and image manipulations, I will now go on to present the new and updated versions of these ads to my client, as well as them in actual world scenario's like these pictures here